CELPIP Writing Band 11+ Model Answer
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CELPIP Writing Practice – Request Email
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Requesting Accommodation from Sambro Housing Agency
You have registered for a six-month computer training program at Sambro Community College. You want to rent a room from Sambro Housing Agency.
You should:
- Explain when you need the room.
- Describe your requirements for the room.
- Ask about costs and the application process.
Body 1: Explain your situation → who you are, why you need accommodation and when you need it.
Body 2: Describe your requirements → room type, location and important facilities.
Body 3: Request information → rental tariff, payment arrangements, application procedure and eligibility requirements.
Quick Brainstorm
Situation: Six-month computer training program at Sambro Community College; need long-term accommodation from September until February.
Requirements: Quiet, well-appointed room; convenient proximity to college; high-speed internet; laundry facilities; kitchen amenities.
Information: Monthly rental tariff, payment arrangements, security deposit, additional charges, application procedure and supporting documentation.
Sample Email
Model Response
Dear Housing Agency Manager,
I am writing to inquire about the availability of suitable accommodation through Sambro Housing Agency.
I have recently enrolled in a six-month computer training program at Sambro Community College and require long-term accommodation from September until the completion of my studies in February. Ideally, I would like to move in shortly before my course begins.
My accommodation preferences include a quiet, well-appointed room in convenient proximity to the college. Access to reliable high-speed internet, laundry facilities, and kitchen amenities would be highly desirable, as these features would support both my studies and daily routine.
I would be grateful if you could outline the application procedure and advise me of the eligibility requirements and supporting documentation required. In addition, I would appreciate information regarding the monthly rental tariff, payment arrangements, security deposit, and any additional charges associated with the accommodation.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your prompt response and further correspondence.
Kind regards,
[Your Full Name]
Band 11+ Language Bank
Use: inquire about / seek information regarding
Use: suitable accommodation / well-appointed room
Use: outline the application procedure
Use: rental tariff / associated fees
Use: in convenient proximity to the college
Use: supporting documentation required
Upgrade Your Vocabulary
Simple Version
I want to know if I can get a room near my college. I am coming for a course and need a place to stay. Please tell me the rent and how I can apply.
I am writing to inquire about the availability of suitable accommodation in convenient proximity to the college. As I will be attending a six-month training program, I require long-term accommodation and would appreciate information regarding the rental tariff, application procedure and eligibility requirements.
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